| Date: | 2006-03-02 22:31 |
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So, I've got this assignment to do. I have to write a monologue about something ,to be delivered by a character, ya-da ya-da ya-da! Anyway. I would like this extremely rough draft edited and I though why not ask RQ? It's five hundred words nothing big. But there are rules, you've got to:
You've got to edit everything (spelling, grammar, word choice) You can't just rip through it and correcting everthing though - I need you to write in little comments [in brackets] so that my teacher can see someone has edited it. Now don't worry about being kind -Russ said he wanted to shoot me in the head and my teacher loved it. So pretty simple:
-Correct it
-Write [comments] throughout
-Send it back. Feel free to post your edits as comments!
Have to! (Note this is amazingly rough!)
( The Mini-Monologue )
And a pretty good example of what I'm looking for
( Edits. )
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| Date: | 2006-03-02 22:40 |
| Subject: | Shout outs! |
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| Music: | Tom Waits - Small Change |
1. CINEMA SUBTERRAIN: SAT, MARCH 18th @ 8pm:
ROMERO-RAMA: a double feature of films by the great GEORGE A. Romero!
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